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Coffee. I like coffee. I liked coffee and I will be like it. I drink coffee in the morning, when possible, strong like young Bruise Willis and black like my soul. But it isn't possible very often. I since high school had disgusted sublimated coffee, bitter brown swill. Because I've been drinking coffee occasionally for me it some like ritual. Roasted grain is ground in manual mill then cooked in the clay pot. As I commonly cook coffee in the weekend I usually have a time for reading book are Facebook =) Enjoy your coffee.

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Coffee.

I like coffee. I liked coffee and I will be  like it.
I drink coffee in the morning, when possible, strong like a young Bruise Bruce Willis and black like my soul. But it isn't possible very often.

I since high school had disgusted sublimated coffee, bitter brown swill.(This sentence is not clear. It's hard to tell what you mean) 

Because I've been drinking  I drink coffee occasionally, for me it is something like a ritual.

The roasted beans are ground in a manual grinder then boiled in a clay pot.
As I commonly cook  make coffee at/on the weekend I usually have a time for reading a book,  that is: Facebook =) Enjoy your coffee.


Here are some coffee terms for you:

coffee beans (not grain)

a coffee grinder (that's the mill) grinds the beans into powder.

You cook breakfast, but you make coffee because coffee is a liquid, not a solid. We make liquids (tea, soup, etc)

Coffee boils, it doesn't cook. (It's a liquid)

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Coffee

I like coffee. I have always liked coffee and I always will be (like it).

I drink coffee in the morning, when (where) possible, (coffee that is) strong like a young Bruce Willis and black like my soul (ONLY USE - if your aim is to be funny). But this often isn't possible very often.

I Since high school, I have been drinking disgusting sublimated instant coffee, bitter brown swill. Because As I've been drinking coffee occasionally for such a long time, for me, it some like has become a ritual  (OR it's now more of a ritual).

Roasted grain is ground in manual mill then cooked in the clay pot.. However, I (much) prefer real coffee, (not that instant swill.) At the weekend (On weekends), I make my own coffee, I grind my own beans, and prepare (make/brew) the perfect blend.
As I commonly cook coffee in the weekend. It takes time to brew, so I usually have a time for reading book are to read the (news)paper or check (my) Facebook. =)

Enjoy your coffee! (Here's to drinking good coffee!)

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Coffee.

I like coffee. Always liked coffee and I want be like it.
I drink coffee in the morning, when possible, strong like young Bruce Willis and black like tar, but it isn't possible very often. (I didn't think Black like my soul is appropriate as having a black soul is to be damned or evil.)
Since high school I had disgusting substandard coffee, bitter brown swill. Because I've been drinking coffee occasionally, for sometime, it is for me like a ritual.
Roasted grain is ground in manual mill then cooked in the clay pot.
As I commonly cook coffee in the weekend I usually have time for reading Facebook =) Enjoy your coffee.

There are differing opinions of the black as my soul expression, but a considerable number of people consider a dark soul as being negative, depressed, suicidal, evil. The black like my soul meaning of don't give a Fuck is quite new and more a novelty. Basically in my opinion it is shallow and inconsequential because it means I don't care about anything except myself.

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I think this kind of writing full of metaphors and similes is too advanced for your level of English. My recommendation would be to submit some more simple articles first maybe just describing something around you. Metaphors and similes are normally idiomatic, so should be avoided until you are confident with the basic words in the language.

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