I no have idea about what write Well, this is my first notebook I write, my english is not very well(I not know what adjectve use in here), I apreciate a any body read this text and to correct my mis

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I no have idea about what write Well, this is my first notebook I write, my english is not very well(I not know what adjectve use in here), I apreciate a any body read this text and to correct my mistakes and explain what my fallures. I am a brasilian, I work with System analisys and going to a master in eletrical engenering. I have a 27 years old. My hobbies are play video game, watch a series and movies, traveling, swiming, listen to music and study. I hope advance in my study about english and make friends in the process. My intention is to be fluent in English for my personal goal.

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I no have idea about what to write about.

Well, this is my first notebook I have writen, my english is not very good well(I do not know what adjective to use in here), I appreciate a any body (use the word "anybody") reading this text and to correct my mistakes, and explain what my failures are.
I am a Brazilian, I work with System analysis and am studying going to get a masters in eletrical engenering. I have a am 27 years old.
My hobbies are playing video games, watching a tv series and movies, traveling, swimming, listening to music and studying.
I hope to advance in my study about of English and make friends in the process.
My intention personal goal is to be fluent in English for my personal goal.

Hello Killdary. You did good! If you would like more explanation about the errors that I corrected, we could set up a time to chat!

I have no idea what to write about.

Well, this is my first notebook that I wrote. My English is not very good (I do not know what adjective to use here), I appreciate that anybody read this text, correct my mistakes, and explain what my failures were.

I am a Brazilian, I work in System Analysis and am working towards a Master's in electrical engineering. I am 27 years old.

My hobbies are playing video game, watching TV series and movies, traveling, swimming, listening to music, and studying.

I hope to advance my study of English and make friends in the process. My intention is to be fluent in English for my personal goal.

I have no idea about what I should write

Well, this is the first notebook that I write, my english is not very fluent OR is not great OR is not yet perfect (I don't know what adjective I should use here). I would appreciate it if anybody would read this text and would correct my mistakes and explain what are my failures.
I am a Brazilian, I work with System analysis and I am going to do a master's in electrical engineering. I am 27 years old.
My hobbies are playing video games, watching series and movies, traveling, swimming, listening to music and studying.
I hope to advance in my english studies and make friends in the process.
My intention is to be fluent in English for my own personal goals

Good job, the important thing is that I understood everything you wrote, so don't worry too much about mistakes. Just keep going and I am sure you will be fluent soon - Yara :)

Thanks Kyle. I appreciate your advice.

Just try to write something every day. This will improve your English a lot. Combine that with reading, and you will be fluent in no time.

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