Let's Have a Picnic!
Let's go on a picnic this coming Sunday! I'll prepare some snacks and Japanese tea, also bring plastic picnic mats and a tarp tent!
If you can make it, please let me know!
Please remember to bring your own lunch and drinks you want!
I hope it's going to be sunny on the day! I can't wait to have the picnic with you!
Why don't you ask your Korean friends who want to talk in Japanse as their practice!
I hope everyone can enjoy the meet up!
See you soon
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There are a lot of exclamation points. Maybe take out half of them.
I would probably use "make" as suggested in the correction if followed by the word "some". But if I wanted to use your verb, I'd just say "I'll prepare snacks."
I'd simplify the request of bringing your own food to "Bring your own snacks and drinks." I'd leave out the "Please remember" and "if you want." In the US we often times will abbreviate this to BYO (bring your own). BYOB is bring your own beer. In this instance if sending out a casual invite like this, I'd say BYO snacks and drinks!
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Let's Have a Picnic!
Let's go on a picnic this coming Sunday! I'll prepare make some snacks and Japanese tea, also bring plastic picnic mats and a tarp tent!If you can make it, please let me know!
[Please remember to] Bring your own food and drinks if you want!
I Let's hope it's going to it will be sunny on the that day! Can't wait to have the a picnic with you!
Why don't You can ask your Korean friends who want to talk in Japanse as their practice! to join us and practice their Japanese at the same time !
I hope everyone can enjoy enjoys the meetup!
See you soon !
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