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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.6th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.6th Nowadays, it has been strange weather here, like, temperatures outside has been rise suddenly, and wind outside have been as strongly as brake the window whose my house has, finally temperatures outside has come back to low again. I feel it so strange about this situation and I can't stand with it anymore since it's really hassle that think something like "which should I wear today?" You know, the weather here has changed into the literally difference weather to the weather yesterday, you know? I feel I was like it is hassle, but there is the thing which make me happy as it's strange weather though. It is that spring is just around the corner. That's why, I was just thinking, the weather nowadays has been so crazy. This situation shows the fact which spring would come tomorrow possibly. Actually, above all, I like spring best of all season as the temperature in spring can be stable, right? Hay fever drives me crazy though.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.6th

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.6th

Nowadays, it has been strange weather here recently, like, the temperatures outside has been rising suddenly, and wind outside has been as strongly as  enough to brake the windows on my family's house whose my house has.  Finally temperatures outside has have come back to low again down (or have 'gone back to normal). I feel it's so strange about this situation and I can't it stand with it anymore since it's really hassle that  to have to think something like "which should I wear today?" You know, the weather here has changed into the literally difference weather to the weather yesterday, you know?  (The weather today is completely different from yesterday you know, - this sounds more natural) I feel I was like it is a hassle, but there is one the thing which makes me happy as it's even though its strange weather though. It is that spring is just around the corner. That's why, I was just thinking, the weather nowadays has been so crazy. This situation shows the fact which spring would come tomorrow possibly. (do you mean - "the strange weather means spring is coming soon?") Actually, above all, I like spring best of all season as the temperature in spring can be is stable, right? Hay fever drives me crazy though.


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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.6th(writing about spring) Nowadays, it has been strange weather here recently, like, the temperatures outside has been rising suddenly, and wind outside has been as strongly as enough to brake the windows on my family's house. Finally, temperatures outside have gone back to normal. I feel it's so strange about his situation and I can't strand with it anymore since it's really hassle that to have to think something like "which should I wear today?" The weather today is completely different from yesterday you know? I feel I was like it is a hassle, but there is one which makes me happy as it's even though its strange weather though. It is that spring is just around the corner. That's why, I was just thinking, the weather nowadays has been so crazy and this strange weather means spring is coming soon. Actually, above all, I like spring best of all season as the temperature in spring is stable right? Hay fever drives me crazy though.

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