formal email
Hi
Someone sent me an Internship offer, and I want to reply to him in formal way
so can you check what I've wrote please?
Thank you for selecting me to join this Internship. I appreciate the time you took to review my profile. I am interested in the internship program, I would like to apply for it
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What you wrote is correct and sounds about right. I'd just add a tiny bit to make it flow slightly better:
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I wish to accept your offer.
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Thank you for selecting me to join this Internship. I appreciate the time you took to review my profile. I am interested in the internship programme, I would like to apply for it.
Dear Sir/ Madam (insert name),
Thank you for selecting me to join this internship programme. I appreciate the time you have taken to review my profile. I am interested in the internship programme and would like the opportunity to apply for it.
1. Program (pertains to TV program; whereas programme pertains to programme of study or an internship programme).
2. I appreciate the time you took (the action hasn’t completely finished yet, so in this instance, it is best to use the present perfect tense, rather than the past tense) e.g. "I appreciate the time you have taken"
I hope this helps!
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