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Crusoe in England Just when I thought I couldn’t stand it another minute longer, Friday came. (Accounts of that have everything all wrong.) Friday was nice. Friday was nice, and we were friends. If only he had been a woman! I wanted to propagate my kind, and so did he, I think, poor boy. and race with them, or carry one around. —Pretty to watch; he had a pretty body. This is my favourite part because I was really confuse if Defoe’s Crusoe was homosexual, but I think this part make sure that he wasn’t even If she said that If only he had been a woman! Bishop’s Crusoe he went to a new environment even if it is home but he feel alone and it’s very normal to express his feelings and to say that he missing his Friend Friday unlike Defoe’s Crusoe that he want to see how strong and superior he is , I don’t’ think that he really wanted to have sex with Friday when he was a man but if were a woman he will not mind , Sometime when you have a friend with the same gender that understand you and you really love her/him you will say “Oh God , if you were a man/woman , I think I will marry you “ we have only the desire but we are not homosexual ,but bishop’s Crusoe had been describe Friday that" Pretty to watch; he had a pretty body " So why he would say that if he didn’t homosexual ? But as I said before they were just friend and when he miss him and had the desire to come back and stay with him he wish if he was a woman he will , and he added that Friday has a pretty body so relate it to what he said before so he will be a beautiful woman and the desire to propagate my kind He will not come true if he was a homosexual

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This is my favourite part because I was really confused if Defoe’s Crusoe was homosexual, but I think this part makes sure that he wasn’t even If he said that if only Friday* had been a woman!

Bishop’s Crusoe went to a new environment even if it was home, but he feels alone. It’s very normal to express his feelings and to say that he missed his friend Friday, unlike Defoe’s Crusoe where he wanted to see how strong and superior he is.** I don’t’ think that he really wanted to have sex with Friday when he was a man but if Friday was a woman he would not have minded. Sometime when you have a friend with the same gender that understands you and you really love her/him you will say, “Oh God, if you were a man/woman, I think I will marry you“ because we have only the desire but we are not homosexual. Yet bishop’s Crusoe had described Friday as "Pretty to watch; he had a pretty body."
So why would he say that if he wasn't homosexual?
But as I said before, they were just friends and when he missed him and had the desire to come back and stay with him. He wished Friday* was a woman then he would since he added that Friday has a pretty body. So relate that to what he said before about if Friday* was a beautiful woman and the desire to propagate his kind. He would not wish this if he was a homosexual.

[* You are using the word "he" in the same sentence to refer to both Crusoe and Friday, which is ambiguous. You must use "he" for only one of them and use the name of the other to make things clear.

** Sentences should not be too long and also must end in periods, not comas.]

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