Can someone correct this for me, pls?
Last week I started to watch "One day at time", because I saw a friend talking about it.
my first impression was that I would laugh a lot with it, but then I realized that besides makes me laugh, It will make me think about some topics ( daughters who grew up without your parents, prejudice with immigrantes, homossexuals and a lot of stuff that happens on a daily basics ).
And my second impression was that I was enjoying that, because I think It's important to talk about topics like that, whitch people need to talk more about it.
So, if someone asked me for some series, I would say One day at time.
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Last week I started to watch "One day at time", because I heard a friend talking about it. My first impression was that it made me laugh a lot, but then I realized that besides making me laugh, it made me think about some topics (daughters who grew up without their parents, prejudice with immigrants, homosexuals, and a lot of stuff that happens on a daily basis). My second impression was that I enjoyed it. I think it's important to talk about topics like that, I feel people need to talk more about it. So, if someone asked me for a series to watch, I would say "One day at time."
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Can someone correct this for me, pls?
Last week I started to watch "One day at a time", because I heard a friend talking about it.My first impression was that I would laugh a lot with it, but then I realized that besides making me laugh, it will make me think about some topics (orphaned daughters, prejudiced immigrants, homosexuals and a lot of stuff that happens on a daily basis).
And my second impression was that I was enjoying that, because I think it is important to talk about topics like that, which need talking more about.
So, if someone asked me to recommend some series, I would say "One day at time."
very well written!
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Can someone correct this for me, pls?
Last week I started to watch "One day at a time", because I heard a friend talking about it.My first impression was that I would laugh a lot at it, but then I realised that besides makes me laugh, it will make me think about some topics ( daughters who grew up without their parents, prejudice towards immigrants, homosexuals and a lot of stuff that happens on a daily basis ).
And my second impression was that I was enjoying it, because I think it's important to talk about topics like that, which people need to talk more about it.
So, if someone asked me to recommend a series, I would say One day at a time.
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