A Restaurant Meal My fiancée and I recently ate at the Mongolian Restaurant. I had called to make reservations, and the clerk was litle rude. She put us down for a 8 p.m reservation. When we arrived,

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A Restaurant Meal My fiancée and I recently ate at the Mongolian Restaurant. I had called to make reservations, and the clerk was litle rude. She put us down for a 8 p.m reservation. When we arrived, the place looked beautiful, and the server gave us a fantastic, free appetizer. I ordered a fresh fish and some vegetables and my fiancée ordered grilled chicken with aspargus, to drink we had ordered the hibiscus tea, we both finished the main course, we ordered one sundae with three top and a strawberrie cheesecake and two espressos. Everything was delicious, so we'll probably go gain.

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A Restaurant Meal

My fiancée and I recently ate at a Mongolian Restaurant. I had called to make a reservation, and the clerk was little rude. She put us down for an 8 p.m reservation.
When we arrived, the place looked beautiful, and the server gave us a fantastic, free appetizer. I ordered a fresh fish and some vegetables and my fiancée ordered grilled chicken with asparagus. To drink we had ordered the hibiscus tea. We both finished the main course. Then we ordered one sundae with three toppings, a strawberry cheesecake and two espressos.
Everything was delicious, so we'll probably go again.

The first paragraph leaves me wondering how she was rude. Was she rude by giving you the reservation for the incorrect time? If you want to clarify, I'll be glad to look at another draft.

A Restaurant Meal

My fiancée and I recently ate at the Mongolian Restaurant. I had called to make a reservation, and the clerk was a little rude. She put us down for a 8 p.m reservation.
When we arrived, the place looked beautiful, and the server gave us a fantastic, free appetizer. I ordered a fresh fish and some vegetables and my fiancée ordered grilled chicken with asparagus. To drink, we had ordered the hibiscus tea and once we both finished the main course, we ordered one sundae with three toppings, and a strawberry cheesecake and two espressos.
Everything was delicious, so we'll probably go again.

Great ! :)

Owen

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