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Daily writings Recently,I've noticed that I can't call to mind my past days.I couldn't even remember what I was doing yesterday.I understood that is all because of my phone. We spend too much time in front of our mobile phones. There is a lot of information that not allows us to focus on real business. I've convinced myself to delete my social pages and life a real life. Everyday I try to do something new ,because it will be a part of my memory.I reckon that after 20-30 years we will not even remember our likes, shares and chats. We have to keep in our minds that a real life outside the window.

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Recently,I've noticed that I can't call to mind ( the more suitable phrase is recall ) my past days ( the better option here is the past few days ) .I couldn't even remember what I was doing yesterday.I understood that it's all because of my phone. We spend too much time in front of our mobile phones. There is a lot of information that not does not allow us to focus on real business. I've convinced myself to delete my social pages and life ( life is a noun, the verb here should be live )  live a real life. Everyday I try to do something new, because it will be a part of my memory. I reckon that after 20-30 years we will not even remember our likes, shares and chats. We have to keep in our minds that ( there is ) a real life outside the window.

Excellent writing, just a couple of mistakes and it's actually a very truthful and relevant text! :)

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