The hate shoud be eliminated
The hate shoud be eliminated there shoud no place for that. Every person should have protection by the law and no way to discriminate his or her right and freedom for choice of living, work with no difference black, white, jewish, muslim. Every perspon shoud be protected from bureaucratic system of any state in this world.
Otherwise, when there is no supreme law and objective consideration of each case in the legal field, chaos begins.
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The hate shoud be eliminated.
The hate shoud be eliminated, there should be no place for that. Every person should have protection by the law and there should be no way to discriminate against his or her right and freedom for choice of living, work with no difference regardless if they are/no matter if they are black, white, jewish, muslim. Every perspon should be protected from the bureaucratic system of any state in this world.Otherwise, when there is no supreme law and objective consideration of each case in the legal field, chaos begins. (you could say "chaos ensues" it's sort of posh but the tone of the rest of your piece seems sophisticated too so it would fit)
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