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The best place to live The place I would like to live in is Bavaria, Germany. I have been there twice and it was love at the first sight. Everything in this land fascinates me: medieval castles, snowy Bavarian Alps, neat, romantic and well-maintained cities, cozy and peaceful villages lying in picturesque valleys… It seemed people there are very cheerful and sympathetic. When they discovered that I don’t speak German, they easily started to use English, despite I had been told they don’t like to do it in general. If I knew what kind of job I could find there exactly, I would move to Munich, the capital of Bavaria. Nowadays it’s my favorite city in the whole world. I like its lively and energetic atmosphere, ginger roofs of the old historical centre and a clear sense of security. What is more, Munich has well-organized and comfortable system of public transport, consisting of trains, buses and metro lines. It even has a train station at the airport, so you can easily reach the centre of the city in around 40 minutes. Perhaps I would choose Nurnberg as a place to live too... Just because of its medieval appearance, so mysterious and dramatic that I can’t help admiring. From time to time I imagine myself standing at beautiful balcony, holding a cup of coffee and watching red sunset behind those ginger roofs. Sweet, perfect dreams… Will they come true?

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The best place to live

The place I would like to live in is Bavaria, Germany. I have been there twice and it was love at the first sight. Everything in this land fascinates me: medieval castles, snowy Bavarian Alps, neat, romantic and well-maintained cities, cozy and peaceful villages lying in picturesque valleys… It seemed people there are very cheerful and sympathetic. When they discovered that I don’t speak German, they easily started to use English, despite that I had been told they don’t like to do it in general.

If I knew exactly what kind of job I could find there exactly, I would move to Munich, the capital of Bavaria. Nowadays, it’s my favorite city in the whole world. I like its lively and energetic atmosphere, ginger roofs of the old historical centre and a clear sense of security. What is more, Munich has well-organized and comfortable system of public transport, consisting of trains, buses and metro lines. It even has a train station at the airport, so you can easily reach the centre of the city in around 40 minutes. Perhaps I would choose Nurnberg as a place to live too... Just because of its medieval appearance, so mysterious and dramatic that I can’t help admiring. From time to time I imagine myself standing at a beautiful balcony, holding a cup of coffee and watching the red sunset behind those ginger roofs. Sweet, perfect dreams… Will they come true?


Very well done. This was easy to read and sounded natural.

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The best place to live

The place where I would like to live is Bavaria, Germany. I have been there twice and it was love at first sight. Everything in this land fascinates me: medieval castles, snowy Bavarian Alps, neat, romantic and well-maintained cities, cozy, dormant villages lying in picturesque valleys… It seemed people there are very cheerful and sympathetic. When they discovered that I don’t speak German, they easily started to use English, although I had been told they don’t like to do that in general.

If I knew what kind of job I could find there exactly, I would move to Munich, the capital of Bavaria. Nowadays it’s my favorite city in the whole world. I like its lively and energetic atmosphere, ginger rooves in the old historical centre and a clear sense of security. What is more, Munich has a well-organized and comfortable system of public transport, consisting of trains, buses and metro lines. It even has a train station at the airport, so you can easily reach the city centre within 40 minutes. Perhaps I would choose Nurnberg as a place to live too... Just because of its medieval appearance, so mysterious and dramatic that I can’t help admiring it. From time to time I imagine myself standing on a beautiful balcony, holding a cup of coffee and watching the red sunset behind those ginger roofs. Sweet, perfect dreams… Will they come true?

very well written!

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