I can't wait to graduate.
After new year's day, my age gonna be 22 years old.
My sister gonna be 21 years old.
She didn't go to the university. Her's high school was accounting high school where the place is studying many things of accounting jobs.
Despite she was not a great grade, she could catch to the first job.
So she became an accountant.
The period after entering the company by now is about 3years.
The fun thing is she was a rookie of the company when I was a student of university before going to the Army.
As far as I know, Nowadays she's studying certificate which related to her job.
By any chance, I noticed her plan which goes to the university with working.
And If she passes this certificate, next gate is only chartered an accountant.
In my case, Now it is starting day for me.
I felt bad for being told that advice not having a think.
But, always I've been became someone out of my think.
If this is how the trip starts, what I become.
So today's credo
Sometimes let's love myself(me).
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My sister gonna be 21 years old.
She didn't go to the university. Her's Her ( No need for an apostrophe here ) high school was accounting high school ( this is also an incorrect way to say to describe the school she graduated from, for example you can say "She went to the accounting high school", or She graduated from the accounting high school) where the place is studying many things of accounting jobs ( the proper phrase here would be Where the subjects are mostly centered around accounting jobs or Where the focus is mostly on accounting).
Despite ( the fact that ) she was not a great grade ( The proper phrase is She didn't have good grades or She wasn't an excellent student), she could catch to ( instead of this, you say: She managed to get her first job) the first job.
So she became an accountant.
The period after entering the company by now is about 3years ( Instead of this, you say for instance: It's been 3 years since she got the job/started working as an accountant).
The fun thing is she was a rookie of the company when I was a student of university before going to the Army.
As far as I know, Nowadays she's studying to get the certificate which relates to her job.
By any chance, I noticed her plan which goes to the university with working ??? not sure what you meant here
And If she passes gets this certificate, next gate step is to become a chartered accountant.
In my case, it is starting day for me ( you could say I'm just getting started)
I felt bad for being told that answering not having a think. ???
Always I've been became someone out of my think. ???
If this is how the trip starts, what I become.
So today's credo
Sometimes let's love myself(me). ???
Overall, you did a good job with the text, but at the end it got a little foggy, i couldn't really tell what you meant with the last few sentences.
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