A normal day
When I woke up this moring, the first thing I did is to paly on my phone. Then I brushed my teeth and wash my face with facial cleanser. After that I put some moisturizer on my face so that it helps skin lock the moisture. Afterwards, I go to prepare my breakfast . I put one avocado, 250 milliliters milk, 50 grams oats and one cup of protein powder in the blender and make a milkshake.
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A normal day
When I woke up this moring, the first thing I did was to play (1) on my phone. Then I brushed my teeth and washed (2) my face with facial cleanser. After that I put some moisturizer on my face so that it helps my (3) skin lock the moisture. Afterwards, I (4) prepare my breakfast . I put one avocado, 250 milliliters milk, 50 grams oats and one cup of protein powder in the blender and make a milkshake.Great Story! I hope these corrections help!
(1) You need to change "is" to "was" because it is in the past.
(2) Since, this happens in the past, you want your verb in the past.
(3) "Skin" must have possessive adjective. (My, his, her, etc.)
(4) First you do not need to use the infinitive form with the verb "go", and you already have the verb "prepare", so adding "go" sounds awkward.
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