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The Internet is useless The Internet is used for communication all over the world.

Although the Internet is considered to be useful, some people think it is bad.

Personally, I think that the Internet is valuable. First of all, students can find a lot of information for school homework with the help of the Internet. Additionally, as an integral part of the Internet social networks keep people in touch round-the-clock. They allows to share one’s emotions with friends. Finally, those who have constant access to the Internet can handle any poor situation. For example, if someone got lost wandering in woods, it wouldn’t take much time and effort to find their way home due to the mobile’s phone GPS and the Internet connection.

On the other hand, some people insist that the Internet is irrelevant. In their opinion using browser influences one’s attention as he or she have to switch between tabs to find necessary information. This leads to perplexity. They also consider that there are loads of unreliable information, for instance, harmful diets.

Despite my respect for their opinion, I cannot share it because wise people pick out only useful information on the Internet to solve daily problems.

All in all, I still strongly believe that the Internet is useful as it greatly simplifies our life.

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The Internet is useless

The Internet is used for communication all over the world.

Although the Internet is considered to be useful, some people think it is bad.

Personally, I think that the Internet is valuable. First of all, students can find a lot of information for school homework with the help of the Internet. Additionally, as an integral part of the Internet, social networks keep people in touch round the clock. They allow allows individuals to share their one’s emotions with friends. Finally, those who have constant access to the Internet can handle any poor situation. For example, if someone got lost wandering in the woods, it wouldn’t take much time and effort to find their way home due to the mobile phone's mobile’s phone GPS and the Internet connection.

On the other hand, some people insist that the Internet is irrelevant. In their opinion using a browser influences one’s attention as he or she has have to switch between tabs to find necessary information. This leads to perplexity. They also consider that there is a load are loads of unreliable information, for instance, harmful diets.

Despite my respect for their opinion, I cannot share it because wise people only pick out only useful information on the Internet to solve daily problems.

All in all, I still strongly believe that the Internet is useful as it greatly simplifies our lives.

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The Internet is used for communication all over the world.

Although the Internet is considered to be useful, some people think that it is bad.

Personally, I think that the Internet is valuable. First of all, students can find a lot of information for school homework with the help of the Internet. Additionally, as an integral part of the Internet social networks keep people in touch round-the-clock. They allows allow to share  sharing one’s emotions with his (or her) friends. Finally, those who have constant access to the Internet can handle any poor situation. For example, if someone got lost wandering in woods, it wouldn’t take much time and effort to find their way to home due to the mobile’s monile phone's GPS and the Internet connection.

On the other hand, some people insist that the Internet is irrelevant. In their opinion using browser influences one’s attention as he or she have to switch between tabs to find necessary information. This leads to perplexity. They also consider that there are is loads of unreliable information, for instance, harmful diets.

Despite my respect for their opinion, I cannot share it because wise people pick out only useful information on the Internet to solve daily  day to day problems.

All in all, I still strongly believe that the Internet is useful as it greatly simplifies our life lives.

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