28.2.2018
I believe all the experiences I’ve got along the road someday will turn into priceless lessons. It may change myself into another direction in the future, in other words, who am I will be formed by experiences. Therefore, I want to jump out of my comfort zone and participate in this program to discover myself. Also, I believe only when we are young can we have enough bravery to embrace the challenges and always ready to pursuit something larger than ourselves. Getting old always make people become fear of losing anything. And now I am young, I always ready to soar and learn when there is an opportunity.
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I believe all the experiences I’ve got along the road someday will turn into priceless lessons. It may change myself move me into another direction. in the future, In other words, who am I will be formed by experiences. Therefore, I want to jump out of my comfort zone and participate in this program to discover myself. Also, I believe only when we are young can we have enough bravery to embrace the challenges and always ready to pursuit *pursue something larger than ourselves. Getting old always makes people become afraid of losing things. And now that I am young, I am ready to soar and learn **whenever there are an opportunities.
*would you like me to explain why I did this?
**You could also shorten “whenever there are opportunities" to “new opportunities"
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