It was a great idea! I read the first part. Many humorous parts (especially with the Weasley Twins), I and my father laughed our heads off. :)) Now I am reading the Chamber of Secrets. It is easier to read for me. The more you read the more you understand :) and Harry Potter is the best choice for studying.

It's enough :) I hope I didn't make many mistakes, I'll be happy if somebody is going to correct my note, but if not - the main thing that I am training my writing skill :)

I totally agree, I don't think you made too many mistakes, some spelling but your sentence structure is good, your sentences make sense and are easy to follow and read.  I have watched all the Harry Potter movies and enjoyed the make believe world of sorcery and magic. Thankyou for an interesting read.

Reading "Harry Potter" in the original

It was a great idea! I read the first part. Much specific humor (especially with Weasley Twins), me and my father (or my father and I) laughed our heads off. :)) now I am reading the Chamber of Secrets. It is easier to read for me. The more you read the more you understand :) and Harry Potter is the best choice for study.

It's enough :) I hope i didn't many mistakes, i'll be happy if somebody is going to correct my note, but if not - the main thing that I am training my writing skill :)

Where are you from? :)

Reading "Harry Potter" in the original

it was a great idea! I read the first part. Much specific humor (especially with Weasley Twins), I and my father laughed our head off. :)) now I am reading the Chamber of Secrets. It is easier to read for me. The more you read the more you understand :) and Harry Potter is the best choice for studying.

It's enough :) I hope I didn't many mistakes, I'll  be happy if somebody is going to correct my note, but if not - the main thing that I am training my writing skill :)

Reading "Harry Potter" in the original

It was a great idea! i Iread the first part. Many in-jokes (especially with Weasley Twins), my father and I laughed our heads off. :)). Now i Iam reading the Chamber of Secrets. It is easier to read for me. The more you read the more you understand :) and Harry Potter is the best choice for studying.

It's enough :)I i hope i Ididn't make many mistaces. Ii'll happy if somebody corrects my note, but if not - the main thing is that I am practicing my writing.

Very well written, but please be more careful about ending sentences and CApitALISatiOn, especially the "I"s.