Los Angeles?
Hey? What do you know about LA? I wanna live in this city so much, because weather in LA better than weather of some Belarusian city(in my opinion). I also like this city because it is in California state and from its beauty!
I'm sick and I didn't go to school today. I'm just seat on bed and write this. It's my first post in notebook and I hope you will correct this and maybe commented:)
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Los Angeles?
Hey, what do you know about LA? I wanna live in this city so much because weather in LA is better than weather in some Belarusian cities (in my opinion). I also like this city because it is in California state and because of its beauty!I'm sick and I didn't go to school today. I'm just sitting on the bed and writing this. It's my first post in Notebook and I hope you will correct this and maybe commented:)
(You can write "It's my first post in Notebook" because it refers to italki's "Notebook" or you can write "It's my first post in my notebook". Either is good!)
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LA is a cool city! Like anywhere, it has both good and bad parts. When I was young I lived near San Francisco, California and had some family in Los Angeles. My earliest memory of LA is that it was hot and I had never seen so much traffic in my life :) Have you visited LA before?
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