The most important person in my life
Could somebody correct my mistakes in this text? I will be grateful!
Answering the question “Who is the most important person in your life”? I am risky to be trivial: it’s me myself. It sounds selfishly and even vainly, right?
But if to look at the point more intently, ask yourself, who have always been staying with you after the doors have been closed and all the voices have been carried away. There is only your personality finally.
Close, emotional relationships, faithful friends and loyal relatives are basically important for our mental health, and it’s a luck and an honor to have them. But so many people have been tending to spend all their lives trying to be comfortable for others, doing something their beloved people want them to do.
It’s so pleasantly to set somebody into the centre of your soul, especially if it’s a person you definitely adore. It’s so simply to get lost, to disappear in a feeling of love or whatever you take as a love. But we have only one life, only one body and a heart that can easily be broken. And in my opinion, the main thing is to learn how to respect yourself firstly, how to save your identity for a happy and harmonious future, where other important and needful people also would be.
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The most important person in my life
Could somebody correct my mistakes in this text? I will be grateful!Answering the question “Who is the most important person in your life”? I am risky to be trivial: it’s me myself. It sounds selfishly and even vainly, right?
But if to look at the point more intently, ask yourself, who have always been staying with you after the doors have been closed and all the voices have been carried away. There is only your personality finally.
Close, emotional relationships, faithful friends and loyal relatives are basically important for our mental health, and it’s a luck (uncoutable, you should write "luck" without "a") and an honor (this one is uncountable too. you can't use indefinite article. But in fact the word "honor" can be uncountable too, but the meaning is different in that case) to have them. But so many people have been tending to spend all their lives trying to be comfortable (I don't think that you choose the right word, I'll find more common one later) for others, doing something their beloved people want them to do.
It’s so pleasantly to set somebody into the centre of your soul, especially if it’s a person you definitely adore. It’s so simply to get lost, to disappear in a feeling of love or whatever you take as a love. (uncountable in that meaning, = as love) But we have the (I'm sure about that just about 80%)only one life, the only one body and a heart that can easily be broken. And in my opinion, the main thing is to learn how to respect yourself firstly, how to save your identity for a happy and harmonious future, where other important and needful people also would be.
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The most important person in my life
Could somebody correct my mistakes in this text? I will be grateful!Answering the question “Who is the most important person in your life”? At the risk of sounding trivial: it’s me, myself. This sounds selfish and even vain, right?
But if you look at the point more intently, ask yourself, who has always been there with you after the doors closed and all the voices have fallen away? There is only yourself, finally.
Close, emotional relationships, faithful friends and loyal relatives are basically important to our mental health, and it’s good fortune and an honor to have them. But so many people have spent all their lives trying to be a comfort to others, doing something their beloved wants them to do.
It’s so delightful to let somebody into the centre of your soul, especially if it’s a person you absolutely adore. It’s so simple to get lost, to disappear in a feeling of love or whatever you take as love. But we have only one life, only one body and a heart that can easily be broken. And in my opinion, the main thing is to learn how to respect yourself first, how to save your identity for a happy and harmonious future, where other important and needful people will also be.
very well written!
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Maybe we should ask him about it :3
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But the native speaker below my correction said that it was possiple, so I don't know)))
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Yep. A/an - indefinite article. You can use it only with singular countable nouns.
I can explain it to you in Russian in detail
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