can someone help me to check the paragraph? Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? *In the second part, I want to explain many people will buy unneeded things in the special offer period, but I am not sure the paragraph is clearly and easy understand? In modern times, we can easy to get any advertisements from internet, store, and magazine, but excessive advertisements are bad effect for us. First of all, advertisements are effect some people thinking then spend unneeded money. Next, it is also testing our logic and values. From my point of view, many stores will spend much money on the advertisement when they have on sale and buy one get one free. In fact, we unneeded it, for example, many teenagers want to buy cookies when on sale, but they still have six kinds of cookies in the home and them unnecessary it. For the other example, many boys like to buy game point when they have the special offer, but it is worthless. I believe many people buy worthless things just because it is on sale. Unfortunately, it is a bad habit for us. Secondly and more importantly though, although too many advertisements around our life, however, we can control and protect ourselves. We should teach children, and teenager reflects before buying anything. In another way, the government should make the law to protect children values and health. As far as I concerned, there are two things should not appear on any advertisement. “Tobacco” and “alcohol,” these are unhealthy for people. It also can stop adults to attract. All in all, advertisements can affect some people thinking and spend money, on the other hand, it also is wasting space and resource. We cannot let every advertisement disappear, but we can ignore or thinking by ourselves. Finally, it all depends on us.