Memories
My names is Jorge. I'm want learn English. Please, can someone to correct the text below:
"Memories. Are like a trailer of past, pictures that pass one over other, with the silence like soundtrack that ends whit a sigh for some sadness of the past or some pleasant memorie that I desire again to relive it ..."
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Memories
My name is Jorge. I want to learn English. Please, could someone correct the text below:"Memories are like a trailer of the past, pictures that pass over one another. Their silence is like a soundtrack that ends with a sigh of sadness, for the past, or for some pleasant memories that I desire to relive again..."
I await your comments,
Thanks.
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Memories
My name is Jorge. I want to learn English. Please, can someone to correct the text below:"Memories are like a trailer of the past, pictures that pass over one another, with the silence like a soundtrack that ends with a sigh for some sadness of the past or some pleasant memory that I desire to relive ..."
I await your comments.
Thanks.
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