Correct my thoughts, please :)
"Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities"@.
How often do you visit your family? How often do you meet with your friends? How do you suppose you have a real friend?
Actually, I think we have a problem with real and virtual life because we have so many different people on your phone so we have a big choice. In my way, I really think that modern women and men don't try to keep a relationship and to obtain each other. We always think that we'll meet another folk who will be more beautiful and more open to you but we don't. I really think that we need to treasure the person if you have met him/her and don't leave your intimate soul. There is so seldom now so don't lose it.
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Correct my thoughts, please :)
"Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities"@.How often do you visit your family? How often do you meet with your friends? How do you suppose( know if ) you have a real friend?
Actually, I think we have a problem with real and virtual life because we have so many different people on your(our) phone so we have a big choice. In my way( opinion), I really think that modern women ,and men, don't try to keep a relationship and to obtain ( don't try to know) each other. We always think that we'll meet another folk (person) who will be more beautiful and more open to you but we don't. I really think that we need to treasure the person if you( we) have met him/her and don't leave your intimate soulmate. There( They are) is so seldom now so don't lose it (them).
So we have a big choice... I was thinking you could say " we have a lot of choices"
We have so many people on our phone so we have a lot of choices.
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Correct my thoughts, please :)
"Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities"@.How often do you visit your family? How often do you meet your friends? How do you know if you have a real friend?
Actually, I think we have a problem with real and virtual life because we have so many different people on our phone so we have a big choice. In my opinion, I really think that modern women and men don't try to keep a relationship and to find each other. We always think that we'll meet another person who will be more beautiful and more open to you but we don't. I really think that we need to treasure the person if we have met him/her and don't leave your soulmate. This happens so seldom now, so don't lose it.
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