Life is wallking
A few days ago, I visited one of my best friends in Tsingdao, where 80 miles away from Long Town.
I stood in front of her gate, rang the bell.
“Is there anyone here?” I shouted. But there was nobody answing me.
I waited out of the gate, got a good view with her beautiful garden.
Later, a surprising voice behind said:” Fancy meeting you here!”
I turned round, “ SURPRISE!” I said. “ where have you been doing??”
“Took a shower. The weather is hot. The heater was broken. When did you arrive?” she led me into the house.
“A while ago.” I followed her, “What a pretty telescope!”
“Haha, you like it, do you?”
“Do I? Do I ? I’m surely always dreaming to have an astronomical telescope ! But I can’t afford it.”
“To be harder, kid.” She smiled.”Coffe, or tee. Which would you like?”
“water.”
“Woo, that’s definitely…. you ! she laughed. “How’s your new work in the power plant?”
“Umm, ok~”
“That’s not a real answer. Honey, why are you coming here? You’re rarely out going.”
“Well, you know, they divorced. It’s ok, not big deal. But now, there is something has changed. Mother will be marring. Father will take me to Liuzhou.”
“What?!” she explained. “No way! How, how could they do that…”
“Umm, don’t know ~Maybe, it’s great.”
“Great?” she gazed at me for a moment. “I don’t think you should go to anywhere again.” She sighed.
“Shouldn’t I go with him, should I? He need someone beside him. And who am I? His daugher!”
She looked out of window for a while, then asked “where will you stay? “.
“Sun Village.” I answered. “A wounderful name. heihei” I added.
“Could you write to me ?”
“Yes, of course.. I’ll miss you.”
“I will miss you, too…”
PS:
Practise to write.
Yesterday, a friend asked me to use "when, where, what, who, how, do, can, would, should" to make questions.
I thought of that all day, got this pad...
There is some sentences I learned in my book. some I saw in the movies and some I made. haha~~
Search from various English teachers...
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Life is wallking
A few days ago, I visited one of my best friends in Tsingdao,I stood in front of her gate and rang the bell.
“Is there anyone here?” I shouted. But there was nobody
I waited
Later, a surprising voice behind said:” Fancy meeting you here!”
Later I was surprised by a voice behind me. It said "Fancy meeting you here."
I turned
Where have you been? / What have you been doing?
“
“A while ago.” I followed her, “What a pretty telescope!”
“Haha, you like it, do you?”
“Do I? Do I ? I’m surely always dreaming to have an astronomical telescope ! But I can’t afford it.”
“To be harder, kid.” She smiled.”Coffe, or
“water.”
“Woo, that’s definitely…. you ! she laughed. “How’s your new work in the power plant?”
“Umm, ok~”
“That’s not a real answer. Honey, why are you coming here? You’re rarely out going.”
“Well, you know, they divorced [Who are 'they'? Who got divorced?]
It’s ok, not a big deal. But now,
“What?!” she
“Umm, don’t know ~Maybe, it’s great.”
“Great?” she gazed at me for a moment. “I don’t think you should go
She sighed.
“Shouldn’t I go with him, should I? He needs someone beside him. And who am I? His daugher!”
She looked out of window for a while, then asked “where will you stay? “.
“Sun Village.” I answered. “A wounderful name. heihei” I added.
“Could you write to me ?”
“Yes, of course.. I’ll miss you.”
“I will miss you, too…”
PS:
Practise to write.
Yesterday, a friend asked me to use "when, where, what, who, how, do, can, would, should" to make questions.
I thought of that all day, got this pad...
There
Good story - well written
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