Please, help to check my small essay AFTER SHOPPING, thanks!
我的厨房很方便。我在商店去了。我买完饭很多。我把羊肉放在冰箱里。水果被我买很新鲜。我 把香蕉放在盘子。我把果汁和啤酒放在冰箱里。。面条和鱼被我做饭好吃。我用筷子吃饭。后面我很饱。一杯绿茶被我泡了。我把有点儿糖在一杯里。我终究很饿。
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我的厨房很方便。我在商店去了。
Do you want to say "I went to shop?" Or "I was in the shop"?
I went to shop=我去了商店
I was in the shop=我在商店
我买完饭很多。
I bought a lot of rice=我买了很多米饭
我把羊肉放在冰箱里。水果被我买很新鲜。
The fruit I bought was fresh=我买的水果很新鲜
我 把香蕉放在盘子。我把果汁和啤酒放在冰箱里。。面条和鱼被我做饭好吃。
The noodle and fish I cooked for dinner was delicious=我用來做饭的面条和鱼很好吃
我用筷子吃饭。后面我很饱。一杯绿茶被我泡了。
I had a cup of green tea=我泡了一杯緑茶
我把有点儿糖在一杯里。
I added some sugar in the cup=我加了些糖
我终究很饿。
I still felt hungry=我仍然覚得饿
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