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At around 10 am, there was a concrete mixer lose its wheel when it was going to the Central construction site. The driver (66 years old) discovered the mixer have a bit out of control, he immediately tried to stop the car. However, the wheels were lose and run away down the road like a horse. One of the wheel crush into a oil station 120 meter away. The other one continued to run and finally stopped next to a bus station which is 400 meter far away.
In the accident, a female was injured while she tried to evade from the wheel. She was sent to the hospital. The driver was charged of dangerous driving afterward.
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Please kindly correct this news translation. Thanks
Thank you in advance for your help.Now to start:
News translation.
At around 10 am, there was a concrete mixer lost two wheels on it's way to the Central construction site. When the 66 yo driver discovered the mixer have a bit was out of control, he immediately tried to stop the vehicle. However, the loose wheels had already started rolling down the road. like a horse. One of the wheels crashed into an oil station 120m away. The other one continued rolling and finally stopped next to a bus station which was 400m away.
In the accident, a female was injured while she tried to evade the wheel. She was taken to the hospital. The driver was later charged with dangerous driving.
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Please kindly correct this news translation. Thanks.
Thank you in advance for your help.Now to start:
News translation.
At around 10 am, a concrete mixer lost it's wheel when it was going to the central construction site. The driver (66 years old) discovered the mixer was out of control, he immediately tried to stop the vehicle. However, the wheels were loose and ran away down the road, like a horse. One of the wheels crashed into an oil station 120 meters away. The other one continued to run and finally stopped next to a bus station which was 400 meters away.
In the accident, a female was injured when she tried to evade the wheel. She was sent to the hospital. The driver was charged with dangerous driving.
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Great work, this was easy to read for a native speaker. There are some extra words, missing grammar and minor misspellings, which I have shown in my correction.
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