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Please, .....Could someone correct this letter? Thanks in advance. Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: •thank them for the photos and for the holiday •explain why you didn't write earlier •invite them to come and stay with you Dear Tom, I am writing to thanks for the great holiday we had in your country and for the beautiful photos you send me. Unlucky, I couldn’t write beforehand because of working reasons. Finally, I take the opportunity to invite you and all our friends to say here. Tom, I enjoyed very much the fantastic holiday we spent together our friends. Furthermore, you sent me splendid photos which will remember me forever those good times. Last but not least, I have to thank you for your marvelous hospitality during the holiday. I wasn’t able to write until now because I had a very busy time at work. During my absence nobody did my duties so, I had made up for lost time. I would want to invite you and our friends to stay here in Italy. In this way we can continue our especially good holiday. Please, send my best greetings to our friends and, I am looking forward to meeting you sooner. PS. I have a free flat all over for us. Warm wishes Peter

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Please, .....Could someone correct this letter? Thanks in advance.

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
•thank them for the photos and for the holiday
•explain why you didn't write earlier
•invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Tom,
I am writing to thanks for the great holiday we had in your country and for the beautiful photos you send me. Unlucky, I couldn’t write beforehand because of work reasons. Finally, I take the opportunity to invite you and all our friends to say here.

Tom, I enjoyed very much the fantastic holiday we spent together with our friends. Furthermore, you sent me splendid photos which will remember me forever those good times. Last but not least, I have to thank you for your marvellous hospitality during the holiday.

I wasn’t able to write until now because I had a very busy time at work. During my absence nobody did my duties so, I had made up for lost time.

I would want to invite you and our friends to stay here in Italy. In this way, we can continue our especially good holiday.

Please, send my best greetings to our friends and, I am looking forward to meeting you sooner.
PS. I have a free flat all over for us.

Warm wishes
Peter


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Please, .....Could someone correct this letter? Thanks in advance.

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
•thank them for the photos and for the holiday
•explain why you didn't write earlier
•invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Tom,
I am writing to thanks for the great holiday we had in your country and for the beautiful photos you sent me. Unlucky,  unfortunately I couldn’t write beforehand because of working reasons. Finally, I take the opportunity to invite you and all our friends to stay here.

Tom, I enjoyed very much the fantastic holiday we spent together withour friends. Furthermore, you sent me splendid photos which will remember me forever those good times. Last but not least, I have to thank you for your marvellous hospitality during the holiday.

I wasn’t able to write until now because I had a very busy time at work. During my absence nobody did my duties so, I had made up for lost time.

I would want to invite you and our friends to stay here in Italy. In this way we can continue our especially good holiday.

Please, send my best greetings to our friends and, I am looking forward to meeting you sooner.
PS. I have a free flat all over for us.

Warm wishes
Peter

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