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I found a nice cafe near my hostel and I liked this set meal which was a cup of ice coffee and the a ham with vegetables sandwich for my breakfast. The cost was for $1.50 USD. It seemed to be popular in this cafe, because I saw many people who stopped by on their mortar motor-bikes and ordered drinks and food taking out. There they were very tasty. What a bore! I sat down at a dining table behind a waitress who was a cute girl working with nice smile. I liked that. I heard that these sandwiches are pretty popular in Vietnam as well. What a bore! I must visit Vietnam too.
The phrase "what a bore" doesnt make much sense in this context, other than that, very good!
[164 My favorite cafe in Siem Reap.]
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I found a nice cafe near my hostel and I liked this set meal which featured a cup of ice coffee and a ham with vegetables sandwich for my breakfast. It cost me $1.5 USD.
It seemed to be popular in this cafe, since many people stopped by their mortar-bikes to order foods and drinks. The meals were very tasty. What a bore!
I sat down a dining table behind a waitress, a cute, smiling girl. I liked that.
I herad these sandwiches are pretty popular in Vietnam as well. What a bore! I must visit Vietnam too.
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