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The birthday of my son My son's birthday
My kid turned six today. complete 6 years old. For me, to be father is a great responsibility and a great honor! My child means everything to is all for me and he teaches me a lot every day.And this day, Today I can only implore God to always enlighten him, and give me
strength and wisdom to educate him.
I hope he becomes a better man than I and can follow a life of honesty and pride proud.
My son is 6 years old of my son... Wow, I'm getting old!!!
The birthday of my son My Son's Birthday
My kid turned six today. For me, being a father is a great responsibility and a great honor!My child is all for me everything to me and he teaches me a lot every day.
On this day, I can only implore God to always enlighten him, and give me the strength and wisdom to educate him.
I hope he becomes a better man than I, and can follow a life of honesty and pride.
6 years old of my son My son is 6 years old... Wow, I'm getting old!!!
-To express possession you just need the ('s): my sister's husband (not the husband of my sister), my mother's kitchen (not the kitchen of my mother). Here's an article: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/determiners/possession-john-s-car-a-friend-of-mine
-We use "turn" to express becoming a specific age. This is an article explaining how to talk about age: https://www.englishoutsidethebox.com/2015/12/11/how-to-talk-about-age-in-english/
-Not sure if you mean "all mine" or "is everything to me"
-If by "implore" you mean "beg", then it's technically correct; but I would just use "ask God".
-Proud is an adjective, pride is the noun. "Pride" on its own usually has a negative meaning, similar to the words "orgulho or arrogância". I haven't seen it used in such a sentence in a positive meaning. A better word would be "dignity".
I hope this was helpful!
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My son's birthday
Today, my son/child
turns 6 years old. For me, being a father is a great responsibility and a great
honor! My child is everything to me and he teaches me a lot every day.
And on this day, I can only implore God to always enlighten
him. And give me the strength and wisdom to educate (him).
I hope he becomes a better man than I and can follow a life
of honesty and pride. (Consider: […] can follow a life of integrity he
can be proud of.)
My son, already 6 years old... Wow, I'm getting old!!!
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