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Introducing myself My name is José Miguel. I’m 54 years old and I’m married since 1989, but we haven’t got any children. However, we’ve got five nephews and three of them are teenagers. Fortunately, one of them is working because the unemployment rate in my city is too high, approximately it’s 45 % according to the range between 18 to 30 years old. Indeed, is the most highest in Spain. My main hobbies are, going to the gym for practicing Pilates and running over the treadmill. I try to do it, three or four times a week. When I’m doing this kind of physical exercises I sweat a lot and I loose many calories, besides with it I get to relax myself and eliminate stress. I’m charge in of the Health and Safety Dpt in a multinational company of Breweries Industries. I’ve been working here from 2.003. Sometimes, my job is very stressful because I have to control the unsafe behaviors and conditions in the Brewery, included employees and contractors. Very often, I use English language to communicate with my colleagues around the world. My head office is located in Brussels. On the other hand, my wife is working in the Account Dpt in a Lawyer Company devoted to the rent and sales of houses, flats or apartments in tourist zones. Indeed, the most important industry in my city is the tourism. My wife, goes with me three or four time a week to the gym, but she doesn’t like the treadmill for running. She prefers to go swimming and to walk slowly in the treadmill, although with an important slope. To conclude, we try to keep a healthy life for this reason we do physical exercises regularly and eat properly, doing a good diet and combining the feeding accurately, for example, no mixing proteins with meet. My wife and myself are doing this two years ago and nowadays we are happier than before. Best, Jose

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Introducing Myself

My name is José Miguel. I’m 54 years old and I’m married since 1989, but we haven’t got any children. However, we’ve got five nephews and three of them are teenagers.

Fortunately, one of them is working because the unemployment rate in my city is too high, approximately 45 % in the 18 to 30 range and is the most highest in Spain.

My main hobbies are going to the gym to practice Pilates and running on the treadmill. I try to do it three or four times a week. When I’m doing this kind of physical exercises, I sweat a lot, loose a lot of calories,  and besides, relax and eliminate stress.

I’m in charge  of the Health and Safety department in a multinational company of Breweries Industries. I’ve been working here from 2003. Sometimes, my job is very stressful because I have to control the unsafe behavior and conditions of employees and contractors at the Brewery. Very often, I use English to communicate with my colleagues around the world. My head office is located in Brussels.

On the other hand, my wife is working in the Accounting Department in a lawyers office concerning devoted the rent and sales of houses, flats or apartments in the tourist zones. Indeed, the most important industry in my city is tourism. My wife goes with me three or four time a week to the gym, but she doesn’t like the treadmill for running. She prefers to go swimming and to walk slowly on the treadmill, although with an important slope.

To conclude, we try to practice a healthy life lifestyle. For this reason we do physical exercises regularly and eat properly.  My wife and myself have been doing this for the last two years, and now we are happier than before.

Best, Jose

Well written Jose. I reorganized it a little and deleted some redundant phrases. Keep writing.


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