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Are these sentences correct? 1) 考试成绩发布后,考得好的学生都很满意。Is the use of "发布" ok here? 2) 明年中国打算把旧飞机更新新的(飞机)。Next year China is going to replace its old airplanes with new ones. 3) 有的时候人人不成功,但是要坚持他们做的事。有的时候生活很艰苦,但是要坚持不懈。I'm trying to say something like: There are times when you're not successful/life is hard, but you have to keep going. 4) 我的男朋友支持我学习汉语。 两年前我在中国留学时,他居然来云南陪我旅行。

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1) 考试成绩发布公布后,考得好的学生都很满意。

2) 明年中国打算把旧飞机更新新的(飞机)用新飞机替换旧飞机。

3) 有的时候人人不成功,但是要坚持他们做的事。有的时候生活很艰苦,有的时候你不能成功,生活也很艰苦,但是仍然要坚持不懈。

4) 我的男朋友支持我学习汉语。 两年前我在中国留学时,他居然曾来云南陪我旅行。(如果你想保留"居然",那前面一句话就得是否定意义,改成"我的男朋友并不支持我学习汉语,但两年前..."。)

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1)used 公布。公布//to make official information such as a report available for everyone to read。//发布release//to let news or official information be known and printed

2) 明年中国打算更新旧飞机。or 中国打算明年更新旧飞机。


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明年中国会把旧飞机更新成新飞机。
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1) "发布" usually News or Company"公布” “ 派發" is ok

2) 明年中国打算把旧飞机更新新的(飞机)。 sorry i don't understand

3 Sometimes people don't succeed,but keep what they do. Sometimes life is tough, but perseverance.

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