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Diary 8 Could someone help correcting my diary please? Thank you!

Today is 21th of February, the last day of the Chinese New Year holiday.

I went to meet three of my best friends in a restaurant selling Coconut Chicken. We used to meet at this restaurant because the foods there are healthy and yummy.

We talked about our work, our plan to go abroad for postgraduate study, our pets and so on.

After lunch, we went to starbucks to continue chating.

We all feel relaxed after talking for a whole day.

Wishing you all a happy day !

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Diary 8

Could someone correct my diary please? Thank you!

Today is February 21st, the last day of celebrating the holiday of Chinese New Year's.

I went to meet three of my best friends in a restaurant selling Coconut Chicken. We used to meet at this restaurant because the foods  is healthy and yummy.

We talked about our work, our plans to go abroad for postgraduate study, our pets and so on.

After lunch, we went to Starbucks to continue our conversations.

After spending the day together, we all felt relaxed!

I wish you all a great day!

Remember: Food is a mass noun which can't be counted. Only under certain circumstances you could say "foods"

For example: 

  • Baby foods – the varieties of food eaten by babies.
  • Gluten-free foods – varieties of food that do not contain gluten.
  • Processed foods – ready-to-eat or pre-prepared food, often less healthy.

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