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Summer camp Before joining the Active Citizens Camp, I was under a lot of pressure. I was afraid to be judged by the other people and always feel so embarrassed to share my own dreams and ambition. So in order to become more confident and to fulfill my social skills, I decided to apply to this summer camp. Time flies, I made friends little by little and suddenly we feel so close with each others like a family. I was encouraged to unravel the possibilities, ensuring that all who pass through their inner fears will have endless opportunities to reach the potential. I also experience in every way the joy of reaching beyond my comfort zone and do some extraordinary things. Humanitarian was in my concern and it is also one of the most lasting problems in this world. It’s hard for me to really make a talk with my friends about those issues but coming at Active Citizens Camp, I suddenly find it easy to share and discuss. As cultural events, social gatherings and athletic activities, I’ve learned that we are a society and everyone plays an important and irreplaceable role that sometimes it is invisible to see and judge. We should listen to the other people’s ideas, not for response but for understanding.

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Summer camp

Before joining the Active Citizens Camp, I was under a lot of pressure. I was afraid to be judged by the other people and always feel so embarrassed to share my own dreams and ambition. So in order to become more confident and to fulfill my social skills, I decided to apply to this summer camp.
Time flies, I made friends little by little and suddenly we feel so close to each other like a family. I was encouraged to unravel the possibilities, ensuring that all who pass through their inner fears will have endless opportunities to reach the potential. I also experience in every way the joy of reaching beyond my comfort zone and do some extraordinary things.
Humanitarian was in my concern and it is also one of the most lasting problems in this world. It’s hard for me to really make a talk with my friends about those issues but coming at Active Citizens Camp, I suddenly find it easy to share and discuss.
As cultural events, social gatherings and athletic activities, I’ve learned that we are a society and everyone plays an important and irreplaceable role that sometimes it is invisible to see and judge. We should listen to the other people’s ideas, not for the response but for understanding.
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Summer camp

Before joining the Active Citizens' Camp, I was under a lot of pressure. I was afraid to be judged by the others and always felt so embarrassed to share my own dreams and ambitions. So, in order to become more confident and to hone my social skills, I decided to apply to this summer camp.
The time flew and I made friends little by little and suddenly, one day, we felt very close to each other like a family. I was encouraged to unravel the possibilities, ensuring that all who pass through their inner fears will have endless opportunities to reach their potential. I also experienced in every way the joy of reaching beyond my comfort zone and doing some extraordinary things.
Humanitarianism is one of my concerns and it is also one of the most lasting problems in this world. It was hard for me to really talk with my friends about these issues but coming to Active Citizens Camp, I suddenly found them easy to share and discuss.
With its cultural events, social gatherings and athletic activities, I’ve learned that we are a society and everyone plays an important and irreplaceable role that sometimes is invisible to see and judge. We should listen to other people’s ideas, not to respond but for understanding.

very well written!

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