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Why are you the best candidate for this Opportunity?
Because I love the Egypt civilization I think its architecture and history is amazing. I want to share this feeling through this volunteer program trying to promoting tourism. I can be very useful because I studied computer science so I can help publishing blogs, videos, pictures, etc. on a web site. I can also solve some technicals problems that it could appear on the road.
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Volunteer Program
Why are you the best candidate for this Opportunity?Because I love the Egyptian civilization. I think it's architecture and history are amazing. I want to share this feeling through this volunteer program and in doing so try to promote tourism. I can be very useful because I studied computer science so I can help with publishing blogs, videos, pictures, etc. on a web site. I can also solve some technical problems that it could appear on the road.
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Hey!
I will be very grateful if you help me correct this entry and tell me what do you think? Does it motivate you?
When you say "appear on the road" ...do you mean you are traveling by car? or are you trying to use the expression.
If you are trying to use the expression you need to say "problems that could appear later down the road"
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