Today is the 18th of February, i went to LongJing mountain with my parents to see the mountain where all covered with tea bushes, then we found there was a trail with beautiful scenes along it. We followed the path and saw many brooks, there was a pretty samoyed dog go with us and add many interests .
We walked 7 kilometers today, feeling tired but happy.
Wishing you all a happy day!
Today is the 18th of February, I went to LongJing mountain with my parents to see the mountain (try not to use the same word again so close together! Could you say "I went on a trip with my parents to see LongJing Mountain?") where which was all covered with tea bushes. Then, we found that there was a trail (I would either say "we found a trail" or "we found that there was a trail" with beautiful scenes scenery along it. We followed the path and saw many brooks, and there was a pretty Samoyed dog go that went with us and add many interests made it more interesting
We walked 7 kilometers today, and I am feeling tired but happy.
Wishing you all a happy day!
Diary 7
Could someone help correcting my diary please ? Thank you!Today is the 18th of February. i I went to LongJing mountain with my parents to see the mountain where which were all covered with tea bushes., tThen we found there was a trail with beautiful scenes views along it. We followed the path and saw many brooks, there was a pretty samoyed dog go that went with us and add many interests [not sure what the last three words mean].
We walked 7 kilometers today, feeling tired but happy.
Wishing you all a happy day!
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