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Hello! Can someone help me and check my cover letter(part of it) in EN? Is it grammatically correct?
Dear Sirs,I wish to apply for the Customer Service Officer position which you advertised on XXX. I read about your organisation's plan to develop your Customer Service department with great interest. I would be keen to work for XXX and be a part of your growing team.
By the end of last year I have been to XXX many times and I finally decided to move here. I have been living in XXX since the beginning of this year and throughout January I was attending a language course to improve my English skills in an advanced level group.
My professional skills appear to be well suited to your company's requirements. I am a self-motivated and flexible person who is looking for opportunities to develop and improve myself and my career here in XXX. Throughout my professional life I have worked in different positions where I gained a lot of work experience related to supporting customers in a professional and friendly manner. The experience I've gained so far will help me to provide a competent excellent service to clients and at the same time approach each client's needs individually. In my previous job I acquired new clients, mainly from the sector of small and medium-sized enterprises, persuading them to purchase company’s services and negotiating terms of cooperation. I answered daily clients requests, built, and maintained long-term business relationships with new and existing clients of the company. Thanks to my full commitment, I guaranteed a positive customer experience, an individual approach to each client and their project, and full satisfaction with the final work. I work well as an individual or in a team environment.
During my career I was always focused on customer needs and so I would like to take my experience in a new direction based in something I’m actually good at. As a confirmation of my character and experience I attach the reference letter from my previous workplace where I was working for over XX years.
I believe that my experience matches the requirements. I am also a quick learner who adapts very well to new situations. I would be very grateful for the opportunity to progress my customer service skills in a company that offers a constructive workplace for communicating and interacting with customers and co-workers. I see this post as a welcome challenge, which I look forward to.
I am currently in Poland for one week but I will be back in XX on the 25th of February. I am available to start immediately.
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Very professional. I've highlighted the gramatical changes. The strikeouts aren't wrong but they are places that you undersell yourself and so switching the language comes off better. Best of luck!
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