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Review of Star Wars:Episode III – Revenge of the Sith This is my review of Star Wars:Episode III – Revenge of the Sith. Please help me to correct and see if I can change some words and phrases more native. Thank you so much~ No matter how many years have passed since George Lucas gave birth to his most brilliant idea, Star Wars are always so fascinating and thrilling. Among the whole series, Revenge of the Sith is such an important one that it brings an end to the former generation and starts the new. There will be no Anakin anymore but a newly christened Darth Vader. George Lucas puts a lot of ideas about the relationships between the characters in this masterpiece. Just seeing how Anakin and Obiwan break up makes me heartbroken. I like these two characters, especially Obiwan, the most adorable Jedi ever. He gives so much love to Anakin as a teacher and teaches him everything with nothing left, ever since Anakin is just a little kid. So you can imagine the great pain in Obiwan tearing him apart, when he knows that Anakin has fallen into the dark side. I love Obiwan to a large extent owing to the actor, Ewan McGregor. His eyes are amazing, they are gentle and clear, showing the most precious heart of Obiwan. They also reflect the struggle inside him when he has to execute his favorite padwan. I think I just can’t get enough of Obiwan Kenobi, a true hero in Star Wars.

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This is my review of Star Wars:Episode III – Revenge of the Sith. Please help me to correct and see if I can change some words and make phrases more native. Thank you so much~

No matter how many years have passed since George Lucas gave birth to his most brilliant idea, Star Wars is always so fascinating and thrilling. Revenge of the Sith is such an important episode as it brings an end to the former generation and starts a new one. There will be no Anakin anymore but a newly christened Darth Vader.

George Lucas puts a lot of ideas about the relationships between the characters in this masterpiece. Just seeing how Anakin and Obiwan break up makes me heartbroken. I like these two characters, especially Obiwan, the most adorable Jedi ever. He gives so much love to Anakin as a teacher and teaches him everything with nothing left, ever since Anakin is just a little kid. One can only imagine the great pain in Obiwan's heart tearing when he discovers that Anakin has fallen to the dark side.

I love Obiwan to a large extent owing to the actor, Ewan McGregor. His eyes are amazing,  gentle and clear, showing the most precious heart of Obiwan. They also reflect the struggle inside him when he has to execute his favorite padwan. I think I just can’t get enough of Obiwan Kenobi, a true Star Wars hero.

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