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Diary 6 Travel in Hangzhou Could someone help correcting my diary please ? Thank you!

Today is 17th of February, i went to walk my dog and sent her to the pet shop to take a bath.

Then I when to a botanical garden to enjoy the beautiful plum blossom and wintersweet with my grandma, grandpa, dad and mom.

At midday, we went to a restaurant and ate Mexican cuisine, to our surprise, the food is authentic and yummy.

We had a good day today.

Wishing you all have a nice day.

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Diary 6 Travel in Hangzhou

Could someone help correct my diary please ? Thank you!

Today is 17th of February, and I went to walk my dog and sent her to the pet shop to take a bath.

Then I when to the botanical gardens to enjoy the beautiful plum blossom and wintersweet with my grandma, grandpa, dad and mom.

At midday, we went to a restaurant and ate Mexican cuisine. To our surprise, the food was authentic and yummy.

We had a good day today.

Wishing you all a nice day.

Very well written!

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Yeah! I made a mistake, thank you!
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Then I went to a Botanical Garden, Isn't it?

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