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please correct if there is a grammar mistake,( school poetry) lying makes you sick, vain and selfish. you have shattered all your dreams for nothing. you try to fight against the demons inside your head look what is died all of your hopes you cant stop saying what's inside of your freaking head i won't stop you 'cause I don't care 'bout you no longer ************ thanks for your answer!

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lying makes you sick, vain and selfish. you have shattered all your dreams for nothing.
you try to fight against the demons inside your head

look what is died
all of your hopes

you cant stop saying what's inside of your freaking head
i won't stop you 'cause I don't care 'bout you no longer

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thanks for your answer!

Very good. Poetry is about anything, love, hate, your cat, your childhood, etc.

There are many styles of poetry available and just like artists paint with colour and texture, a poet paints with words. In my opinion you writing is clear and understandable.

I use an expression 'what goes around, comes around' or 'you reap what you sew'. You have effectively said the same thing. Lying destroys trust, makes others not care about you, because they do not trust a word from your mouth.
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Nuts I added a correction instead of editing the existing correction. Anyone know how to remove this? So annoying.

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