What I hope to gain from my time at university

I would like to gain something important by learning English from my time at university, by learning English, because learning English enables me to know acquire a new view of the world.

First, I hope to be able to speak English. At my senior high school, there were no opportunities to interact with English speakers so that I only studied written English. Thus, I will gain a lot of opportunities to speak English with English speakers.

Second, I hope to get good relationships with others around me. I will be able to make friends with who those who are learning with me at university. Plus, I can make friends with a lot of foreigners if I take advantage of the opportunities study around. I would like to gain lasting friendships from my time at university.

Considering those reasons, I should dedicate a lot of my time to learning English at university.

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