Please correct me if I'm wrong, thanks !

2. My favorite piece of china fell from the cabinet and fell to bits.

3. After the invading of Germany, my teacher won't teach German for anything .

4. Those two brothers made fools of themselves arguing for the heritage at their father's funeral.

5. Jimmy was in highest spirits despite the weakness during his last life.

6. Tom didn't mean to hurt you, he just told you the truth .

7. The entire concert hall burst into applause when the world famous three tenors had performed on the stage.

8. He had the honor of meeting a number of scientists while visiting the Oxford university as a visiting scholar.

9. "It never entered my mind that the old model is a millionaire." Crid Hugh.

  Spaniards Plácido Domingo and José Carreras and the Italian Luciano Pavarotti

Please correct me if I'm wrong, thanks !

2. My favorite china felt fell from the cabinet and felt shattered to bits.

3. After the invading of Germany, my teacher won't teach German for anything . It sounds a little weird.  Try: After the invasion of Germany, my teacher refuses to teach any German.

4. Those two brothers made fools of themselves arguing for the heritageinheritance at their father's funeral.

5. Jimmy was in highest spirits despite weakness during his last life. Jimmy was in high spirits despite... (the rest doesn't make sense to me)

6. Tom didn't mean to hurt you, he just told you the truth .

7. The entire concert hall bursted into handclapapplause when those three tenors of the world known had shown showed up on the stage.

8. He had the honor of meeting a number of scientists during his visit to visiting the Oxford university as a visiting scholar.

9. "It never entered my mind that the old model is a millionaire." Crid Hugh. Does "old model" refer to someone who used to model as a career?