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I was in house of my best friend all day. we speak all, we laugh and ate. we went to the park, the zoo and ate an ice cream together. she's as a sister for my, I love her so much. I will wait the next time with great enthusiasm.
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I was in my best's house all day. We all spoke, we laughed and ate. We went to the park, the zoo and ate an ice cream together. She's as a sister to my me (however, it would sound more natural to say that "she is like a sister to me"), I love her so much. I will wait until the next time with great enthusiasm (however, it would sound more natural if you said "I'm really looking forward to our next meeting").
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This day
I was in house of my best friend all day. we speak all, we laugh and ate. we went to the park, the zoo and ate an ice cream together. she's as a sister for my, I love her so much. I will wait the next time with great enthusiasm.I stayed in my best friend's home whole day . We chatted ,laughed , and ate some food . We went to a park ,a zoo and ate an ice cream together. She is like my sister and I love her so much. I enthusiastically look forward to meeting her next time.
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