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Tomorrow is Valentines Day Tomorrow is Feb 14th that is Valentine's Day in American. As I know this special day is not noly for lovers to celebrate but also friends to express their friendship. Children exchange cards or share candies to their friends in school. Young man and women dinning out to celebrate this day.

In china we also have Valentine's Day that in lunar month july 7th. In that day men will give some flowers or chocolate to women as a gift to express their love.they also going out for dinner.But for children do not celebrate this day. Lunar Valentine's Day only belong lovers.

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Tomorrow is Valentines Day

Tomorrow is Feb 14th that is Valentine's Day in America. As I know this special day is not only for lovers to celebrate but also for friends to express their friendship. Children exchange cards or share candies with their friends in school. Young men and women dinning out to celebrate this day.

In china we also have Valentine's Day that in lunar month july 7th. In that day men will give some flowers or chocolate to women as a gift to express their love.they also go out for dinner.But      children do not celebrate this day. Lunar Valentine's Day only belong  to lovers.

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I'd write it like this:
Tomorrow is Feb 14th that is Valentine's Day in America.  As I know, this special day is not for lovers only but also for friends to express their friendship. Children exchange cards or share candies to their friends in school. Young men and women dine out to celebrate this day.

In China, we too have Valentine's Day that comes in lunar month July 7th. On that day men give some flowers or chocolate to women as a gift to express their love. tTey also go out for dinner But children do not celebrate this day in China. Lunar Valentine's Day is only for lovers.

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