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The role of mother in our life. When we talk about "Mother" we couldn't even tell how much the words to reveal that she such an valuable and meaningful for us. For me she is an angel in person, she looks perfect because she can do and be anything. She is my teacher, doctor, best friend, sister even she could do what dad's job. Looking back when i was 8 year, my father worked out of town for 7 years and he could go home once a month or once in two months, in that time my father haven't get his own business.even though my father works out town she could play a role as a father, my mother have been fighting hard raising her children (me and my two siblings), educates us with her affection and tenderness to be a better person, Showers us with attention. She tireless although she was feeling under the weather she still strong and tough. I must appreciate for all the sacrifices my mother made. No matter how many times we argue, how many times i don't understand you, how many times i get scolded by you. you're my greatest mom in this world. Mom i'm grown up now, and it's brand new day i'd like to put a smile on your face everyday, because i love you since i opened my eyes. You're the number one for me... You're my hero... You're my everything...

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The role of mother in our life.

When we talk about "Mother" we couldn't even begin to tell how much the words to reveal that she such an valuable and meaningful she is to us.       

For me she is an angel in person, she looks perfect because she can do and be anything. She is my teacher, doctor, best friend, sister;  even she could even do what our dad's job.

Looking back to when I was 8 years old, my father worked out of town for 7 years and he could go home once a month or once in two months. in At that time my father haven't get hadn't yet started his own business. Even though my father works worked out town she , my mother could play a role as a father. My mother have been fighting fought hard raising to raise her children (me and my two siblings), educates and teach us with her affection and tenderness how to be a better person.

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She showered us with attention. She was tireless. Even when she was feeling under the weather she stayed still strong and tough. 


I must appreciate her for all the sacrifices my mother made. No matter how many times we argued, how many times i don't I didn't understand you, how many times i get I got scolded by you, I still think you're my the greatest mom in this world. Mom, I'm grown up now, and it's a brand new day. I'd like to put a smile on your face each and everyday because I love you ever since I opened my eyes.

You're the number one for me...
You're my hero...
You're my everything...


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Thank's a lot... :)
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Your essay was so long I ran out of space so I corrected it in two sections. It sounds like she is the perfect mom!
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Hit thumbs up accidentally, but I love what you've shared!! so much love

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