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Every country has your own "Inês Brasil" Not long time ago i watched Budok Yellow by Cardi B, at first i thought "what's that". So, soon after i liked the song's flow, the beats and the different way Cardi b sounds to me. Actually i'm not the only one who likes her. I figured out that she was a stripper and she looks different for american people. I'm brazilian and i guess, here we have a interesting artist like Cardi B, Her name is Inês Brasil. She used to be a hooker( i hope this word doesn't be offensive like the word bi***h), but now a lot of people loves her, becasuse She is funny and sincere like Cardi B .

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Every country has your own "Inês Brasil"

Not long time ago i watched Budok Yellow by Cardi B , at first i thought "what's that".
So, soon after i liked the song's flow, the beats and the different way Cardi b sounds to me.
Actually i'm not the only one who likes her.
I figured out that she was a stripper and she looks different for american people.
I'm brazilian and i guess, here we have a interesting artist like Cardi B, Her name is Inês Brasil.
She used to be a hooker( i hope this word doesn't be offensive like the word bi***h), but now a lot of people loves her, becasuse She is funny and sincere like Cardi B .


Every country has your own "Inês Brasil"

Recently, I watched Budok Yellow by Cardi B. and at first I thought "What's that?". - needs a comma after recently, capitalize I because it is a pronoun and What's because it is the beginning of a sentence."
Soon after listening, I decided I liked the song's flow, the beats, and the different way Cardi B. sounds to me. 
Actually I'm not the only one who likes her. 
I found out that she was a stripper and she looks different  to American people. 
I'm Brazilian and I guess,  here we also have an interesting artist like Cardi B.; her name is Inês Brasil.
She was also once a hooker ( I hope this word isn't offensive like the word bi***h), but now a lot of people love her, because she is funny and sincere, like Cardi B .


-Good writing! Just remember to capitalize your "I". Yes Cardi B. is an interesting character, but I do like her despite her craziness. Hooker is not a bad word in the way that you were using it and thanks for letting me know about Ines brasil. I looked her up and she is interesting as well. 

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