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I know a lot of people who likes to play team sports, but I have many friends who prefer to play individual sports too. Each of these have advantages, but I prefer individual sports because there are less fewer conflicts and I do not depend on other people.

To begin with, team sports are training our social skills. Players need to talk a lot to each other to improve their game, solve problems and conflicts. For example, a very shy child will stay become more confident with people if he has socialised since childhood. The reason for this is that team sports practice your interaction and social skills and make you more better prepared for adult life. You have a lot of contacts and friends, because there are many conversations at the hour of training and during a game.

Though there are advantages in playing team sports there are some even more compelling advantages for me in playing individual sports. In individual sports you control the game and do not depend on others. For example, a tennis player is always active and he does not wait steps rely on other players, he just repel on reacts to his opponent. All attention is drawn to him. There is less responsibility in individual sports. You rely only on yourself and no-one can accuse you of anything. For example, the fencer lost the fight. Maybe he was badly prepared, but it is his own fault and no one resents on him (feels resentful towards him). Individual sports are more fairer, you rule the game and you are responsible for the results.

To sum it up, I think that individual sports match suit me more. This is because such sports raise confidence and responsibility in people and teach people to rely only on yourself themselves.

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I know a lot of people who like to play team sports, but I have many friends who prefer to play individual sports too. Each of these have advantages, but I prefer individual sports because there is less conflict and I do not need to depend on other people.

An advantage of team sports is that they train our social skills. Players need to talk a lot to each other to improve their game and solve problems and conflicts. For example, a very shy child will be more confident with people if he has been socialized since childhood to talk to others. In team sports, you get to practice your interaction and social skills, which makes you more prepared for adult life. You make a lot of contacts and friends, because there are many conversations during training and games.

Though there are advantages to playing team sports, there are some even more compelling advantages for me to play individual sports. In individual sports you rule the game and do not depend on others. For example, a tennis player is always active and he does not need to wait for his doubles partner to act -- he just reacts to his opponent. All attention is drawn to him. There is less responsibility for others in individual sports. You rely only on yourself and no one can accuse you of anything. For example, the fencer lost the fight. Maybe he was badly prepared, but it is his own fault and no one else's. Individual sports are more fair in that you control the game and you are responsible for the results.

To sum it up, I think that individual sports better match my preferences. This is because such sports boost confidence and responsibility in people and teach people to rely only on themselves.