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My husband and I went to Brocken My husband and I went to Brocken by steam locomotive to see a beautiful scenery from the top of the mountain. Unfortunately it was snow storm and foggy we were not able to see a clear view from there. We were very disappointed. He took pictures of a steam locomotive there. After that we left Werningrode and went to Plague in Czech Republic by train. It took about 8 hours. It was a long time tiring trip.

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My husband and I went to Brocken

My husband and I went to Brocken by steam locomotive train to see a the beautiful scenery from the top of the mountain. Unfortunately it was snowing storm and foggy so we were not able to see didn't have a clear view from there. We were very disappointed. He took pictures of a steam locomotive there. After leaving that we left Werningrode and we went to Plague, in Czech Republic by train. It took about 8 hours. It was a long time tiring trip.

Although locomotive is correct - it is more natural to say steam train, when using it as transport.  Locomotive is fine when taking pictures. :0 But either is ok.

it was snowing and foggy or there was a snow storm and fog.

we didn't have a clear view or we couldn't see clearly

It was a long tiring trip but thoroughly enjoyable.

sounded enjoyable to me - to end with "it was a long tiring trip" sounds like it wasn't enjoyable - so I would add but......

:)

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