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It snowed. The other day, snow lay on the ground rarely. I was excited. I went out from home, so neighbors played in snow everywhere. I enjoyed the feeling that I trod on snow. However, I had mixed feelings because of snow damege. ...now, the snow has melted mostly.

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The other day, snow lay on the ground rarely.
The other day it snowed, which is rare.
I was excited.
I went out from home, so children played in 
snow everywhere.
We went outside so the children could play everywhere in the snow.
I enjoyed the feeling that I trod on snow.
I enjoyed the feeling of walking on the snow.
However, I had mixed feelings because of snow damege.
However, I had mixed feelings because of the snow damage.
...now, the snow has melted mostly.
... Now the snow has mostly melted.
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The other day it snowed, which is rare.
I was excited.
We went out of the house so the children could play everywhere in the snow.
I enjoyed the feeling of walking on the snow.
However, I had mixed feelings because of the snow damage.
...now, the snow has mostly melted.

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