你写了：“I 'm so happy that i can make friend with you .“

应该改为：“I'm so happy that I can make friends with you."

你写了：“little cute ,little crazy is my .sometimes little quiet ,and i'm brave ,optimistic.“

应该改为：“I'm a little cute, and a little crazy. Sometimes a little quiet. I'm also brave and optimistic."

你写了：“I always watch movie or American TV series . it's good way for me to start.and I enjoy .“

应该改为：“I'm always watching movies or American TV series. It's a good way for me to start, and something that I enjoy doing"

你写了：“for the sports.I interested in badminton or basketball.of course i'm amateur。“

应该改为：“As for sports, I'm interested in badminton and basketball. Of course, I only play for fun and exercise, I'm not a professional.  

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hello everyone ! my name is zhangqing.you can also call me nancy .I 'm so happy that i can make friends with you by this website .I'm little cute ,little crazy  .but somgtimes  little quiet ,and i'm also brave and optimistic.I love watch movie or American TV series .it's a good way for me to study .and I enjoy it .in terms of  the sports.I prefer playing badminton or basketball.of course i play it just for fun.so if you ask me who is your favorate sport star .i can't answer it i'm not professional 。i hope you like me .