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Nigthmare I'm sitting on a chair and think about my last weekend. Friday evening, I swam with my family in a swimming pool. The water was warm and my kids had fun. After then I called a pizzacurier and ordered a salami pizza. The pizza had delayed and we was very hungry. One our late the pizza boy was coming. While we was eating the pizza, our bell rang. My wife opend the door and saw eine forein person. He asked my wife for some money and she gave him money for a meal. Two hours later, it was a noon and I brougth my girl to bed. In my break I was learning English, suddenly shouted my girl and I ran to her room. She stood in her bed and saw afraid. I asked she, "did you have a nigthmare?" She answered me. "Yes, it was terrible." Then I lied to her on bed. 10 min. later she slept. I have remembered to this moment now and I'm happy, that also ok with my little girl.

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Nigthmare

I'm sitting on a chair and thinking about my last weekend. Friday evening, I swam with my family in a swimming pool. The water was warm and my kids were having fun. After, I called a pizza delivery and ordered a salami pizza. The pizza was delayed and we were very hungry. One hour later the pizza boy had come. While we were eating the pizza, our bell rang. My wife opened the door and saw a strange person. He asked my wife for some money so, she gave him money for a meal. Two hours later, it was noon and I put my girl to bed. During my break I was learning English when suddenly my girl shouted and I ran to her room. She stood on her bed and looked afraid. I asked her, "Did you have a nigthmare?" She answered me, "Yes, it was terrible." Then I lied next to her on the bed. 10 min. later she fell asleep. I have remembered to this moment how happy I am that everything is O.K. with my little girl.
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Nightmare

I'm sitting on a chair and thinking* about my last weekend. Friday evening, my family and I swam in the swimming pool. The water was warm and my kids had fun. After that I called a pizza courier and ordered a salami pizza. The pizza was delayed and we were very hungry. One hour late the pizza boy was. While we were eating it, the door bell rang. My wife opened the door and saw a stranger. He asked my wife for some money and she gave him enough for a meal. Two hours later, it was a noon and I brought my girl to bed. In my break I was learning English, and suddenly my girl cried and I ran to her room. She stood in her bed and was clearly afraid. I asked her, "did you have a nightmare?" She answered "Yes, it was terrible." Then I lay her in the bed. 10 min. later she was asleep. I remember this moment now and I'm happy that things are ok with my little girl.

*I'm sitting and thinking and smoking ..., or, I sit and dream and smoke ... (not to mix things).

Very well written!

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