Lack of the water in Cape Town
Today I read about the lack of water in Cape Town. In this year Cape Town probably will get with no water in its reservoirs.
It is a serious problem that the world's major cities may suffer from lack of clean water for the next two decades. In addition, there are many immense rivers that are polluted by the population or industry.
I believe that is a huge problem because some cities don't have a plan to resolve this at this time, instead of creating a way to not suffer like Cape Town in the future, they prefer to see what will happen.
Thx.
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Lack of the water in Cape Town
Today I read about the lack of water in Cape Town. In this year Cape Town will probably will get with no water in its reservoirs.It is a serious problem that the world's major cities may suffer from lack of clean water for the next two decades. In addition, there are many immense rivers that are polluted by the population or industry.
I believe that is a huge problem because some cities don't have a plan to resolve this at this time, instead of creating a way to not suffer like Cape Town in the future, they prefer to see what will happen.
Thx. Thanks.
I made a few corrections but your writing is very clear in you meaning and communication
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Lack of the water in Cape Town
Today I read about the lack of water in Cape Town. In this year Cape Town probably will get with no water in its reservoirs.It is a serious problem that the world's major cities may suffer from lack of clean water for the next two decades. In addition, there are many immense rivers that are polluted by the population or industry.
I believe that is a huge problem because some cities don't have a plan to resolve this yet, instead of creating a way to avoid suffering like Cape Town in the future, they prefer to see what will happen.
Thx.
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Very well written! The last sentence is a bit of a run on sentence, but it's minor!
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