Diary 3

Today is February 11th, I am on the way driving to Hangzhou* with my dad, uncle, my dog and one of my friends.

(*You can say "I am on the way to Hangzhou" or "I am driving to Hangzhou" not both together)

(** "and a friend" OR "and one of my friends")

We started driving at 7 o'clock this morning and have brought a lot of food, a large bottle*** of tea and a bottle*** of coffee.

(*** As a native English speaker I wouldn't use the word "bottle" when talking about tea or coffee unless its ice tea/ice coffee. Maybe the word "flask" would be better here)

We will arrive Hangzhou at about half past 11.

The scenery is good along the road, I like this self-driving tour****.

****(I'm not sure about this phrase. I think the term self-driving is now just being applied to self-driving cars, and I think it would be more natural just to say "driving tour" or "road trip".)

Diary 3

Today is February 11th, I am driving to Hangzhou with my dad, uncle ,my dog and one of my friends.

We started driving at 7 o'clock this morning and have brought a lot of food, a large bottle of tea and a bottle of coffee.

We will arrive in Hangzhou at about half past 11.

The scenery is good along the road, I like this self-driving tour.

Hope this helps!

Diary 3

Today is February 11th. I am on the way driving to Hangzhou with my dad, uncle, my dog and one of my friends.

We started driving at 7 in the morning (or you can just say a.m.) and have brought a lot of food, a large bottle of tea and a bottle of coffee.

We will arrive Hangzhou at about half past 11 11:30 (you say half past 11 when speaking but normally wouldn't type it out in messages).

The scenery is good along the road. I like this self-driving tour.